I can - the composition is wonderful - the suitcases lead you up round the sloping wall, along the ceiling, down the racks and back along the table edge and grain of the wood. The warm browns are nicely offset by the touch of coolness in the racks, and the stillness of the subject is offset by the energy of the eyes' movement. It could be the attic next to the room with the wardrobe from C S Lewis! Splendid work!
And Martin, I like your portrait too. Delicate work with the face really gives your subject character and individuality, and the landscape format allows you a good, punchy contrast between your subject and the background, especially as you have avoided placing her in the centre.
Philip1961's Gallery