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Last post 29-06-2008, 9:32 PM by Stevey. 857 replies.
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  •  04-01-2008, 6:05 PM 690352 in reply to 663144

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    alan1572:

    How do i get rid of the light streaks, is it an exposure thing or do i need a filter? It was only on a Fuji E550 point and shoot, but it will help when i start to use my new camera, cheer's.

    It look to me like grease on the lens. Try cleaning with a lens solution as this should clear the problem. Big Smile [:D]


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  •  04-01-2008, 7:59 PM 690432 in reply to 690184

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    adam91:

    GhostlyFour, this is quite a nice idea.. technically very good, well focussed and the exposure looks pritty much bang on. The colour is nice, the goldy yellow in the wine is a really nice tone. The only thing that is a bit distracting are the blurred highlights in the background, would be nice to see a similar shot up against a plain background maybe? i dunoo though i dont know alot, this is just my opinion Smile [:)]

    this is an new edit of an older picture i took during the summer:

    I can certainly give that a try.  You just might have something there.  Thanks!


    Pat
  •  04-01-2008, 9:32 PM 690505 in reply to 690337

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    markblyth:

    if u have cs3 u can clone the dark areas so u can`t see the blurry lights. heres some of mine for critisism please reply

    ayegarthfalls1.jpg

    It looks like an awkward subject - the tree coming out of the top just looks truncated and will lead to an awkward crop no matter what you try to do. It's the tangled roots that make the subject, perhaps just cropping to only include the roots as a texture based image? Or take a chainsaw next time? Wink [;)]

    Including the tree, though, I don't know what you can do about it, as it will probably look awkward no matter how you try to compose the shot.


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    I think I commented on this one in your gallery - superb shot, the only change might be to get a few more pixels on the right side to keep the bolt from going out of the frame. Or maybe if you were over further to the left to get the pilings to rake more across the photo and end up not in the centre of the frame? Probably only a step or two to the left would do it.

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  •  04-01-2008, 9:51 PM 690515 in reply to 689971

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    GhostlyFour:

    Here is my shot of these bar glasses already lined up on the bar at a wedding shoot that I was working.  I just couldn't resist the fact that maybe someone was playing musical glasses and I just had to take a shot!

    Bar Glasses

    I really like this shot.  If I could make one suggestion it would have been to have the levels of wine in the glasses desceding from left to right in equal amounts.

    I know that you said that you found them lined up, but it might be an idea for the future?

    Cheers
    Ian


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  •  05-01-2008, 6:46 PM 691136 in reply to 690515

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    cairntoul:
    GhostlyFour:

    Here is my shot of these bar glasses already lined up on the bar at a wedding shoot that I was working.  I just couldn't resist the fact that maybe someone was playing musical glasses and I just had to take a shot!

    Bar Glasses

    I really like this shot.  If I could make one suggestion it would have been to have the levels of wine in the glasses desceding from left to right in equal amounts.

    I know that you said that you found them lined up, but it might be an idea for the future?

    Cheers
    Ian

    Ian,

    I agree - I might just try that one next time.  Thanks for the suggestion!

     


    Pat
  •  05-01-2008, 7:03 PM 691148 in reply to 298908

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    Ray Willard:

    Yes Pk i would have to agree with Filter here. The glow on the bottom needs to be cropped,

    Filter your picture has a great moody feel to it. I just feel that if you would have follow the golden grid rule (or what ever its called) and place the statue with in where the line meets it would balance the picture out. Still a very good picture...

    Well thats mine fire away.

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    Ray,

    I love your shot.  The colorful, beautiful sky with the grain standing out against the sky makes for one awesome composition.  It is very nicely cropped.  I really don't see what else you could have done with it except to give it a nice frame in a contrasting color.


    Pat
  •  05-01-2008, 7:08 PM 691152 in reply to 655765

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    fatbobsufc:
    Ron P:

    Hi Folks.

    Comments on the below please, good or bad.

    Like the picture (though it is a little overexposed).  Would have been interesting to try this 5 paces to the right to see whether the overhanging branch adds a different perspective.

    I also find the sky really washed out.  I would also have balanced the shot better depending on what is on the right or left.  The stream I find has really nice rich colors along with the golden of the tree.  This shot definitely has potential to it.  Keep at it - you really do have an eye for this. 


    Pat
  •  05-01-2008, 8:58 PM 691209 in reply to 691152

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    ron you have over exposed a hell of alot if u have cs3 you can correct this u must have been on a bridge why not get down to the waterfall and get up close to it where is the waterfall? take a look at my pics i have some waterfalls but alot of mine are well flooded
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  •  06-01-2008, 5:24 PM 691729 in reply to 691209

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    Went picture taking on the Southbank/Canary Wharf at the weekend and got quite a few photos. Here are a few. Ill post some more up later.












  •  06-01-2008, 7:10 PM 691913 in reply to 690184

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    Hi Adam91, I like the clouds and the building but the photo's too dark on the right side for my taste.

    Here's one of mine, did I ruin the picture by taking it on a diagonal?


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  •  06-01-2008, 9:34 PM 692073 in reply to 691913

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    Hi tuffytuffs, I have to agree with you on this one diagonal is not quite my taste, having said that it may be interesting to keep the shape but level the horizon?

     

    Inspired buy the dark mood of the previous post, and after finding some interesting highlight images online I spent 15mins on the following ?

     

    Good? Bad or Ugly I am not sure!

     

    Black

     

    Comments on how to do this well would be nice..

     

    Steve

     

     

     


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  •  06-01-2008, 10:09 PM 692118 in reply to 692073

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    Had a go at the Dragan effect, first time at doing so. Be interested to know thoughts.



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  •  13-01-2008, 7:56 AM 697040 in reply to 692118

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    Cwainwright, This effect isn't usually for me personally but is actually quite effective with this shot!!
    I always think it gives a 'pencil crayon' effect which leads to a bit of a cartoon type appearance. On your shot it has accentuated the detail and texture in the singers face and expression and with the boost in saturation has emphasised the energy here.
    Overall I think I like it, it could easily be a piece of album artwork. Well done.
    Adam

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  •  13-01-2008, 3:17 PM 697296 in reply to 697040

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    What do you all think?

    drip James

     


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  •  17-01-2008, 8:53 AM 700734 in reply to 697296

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    Hi. I've started out this year taking some low light shots around my home town. I would like to hear what you think of these.

    Clyde Weir 3

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